Hello all!

I've been working on a new piece and wanted to know what you guys think. I also have a few questions.

1. The instrument/melody that starts at 0:56, do you like it? I put some delay on it, should i keep it like that? do you like the sound? or should I change it to a different lead?

2. Anything else wrong with this song that I should be aware of?

Thanks in advanced!