It Rocks!

It Rocks!

-pirateofcarribean

Nice job on this one!

Nice choppy vocals - you did a nice job on that - it sounded a little quantized in parts - to many notes hitting on too many regular beats but I really liked it. The beats were pretty standard but not too bad.. Maybe a few rolls or fills here and there - (just personal preference - I lean toward D&B and Jungle) - Maybe you should remix it - maybe swing the vocals higher and lower in parts - an entire octave up or down for a 16th or a triplet here and there - sort of 5th element style... - Nice happy tune though, the reversed reverb on the vocals was good. The support elements - pads etc. were there - I'm sure of it but they were not apparent - I was focused too much on the operatic element. The bass needs a little fattening up - sounded too bouncy -

I like this one best so far!

Great job!

so...

...im listening to it. And im enjoying the nice lyrics and the filtered drums. Now i think it would be awesome if it filtered out slowly. instead u kick it straight out into the open with the clear beat. Nice, but would have been better with a filter.

So then As i listen more, i like the slicing job u did on the lyrics, sloppy, but good. Then u add the main chorus instrument. I like it, but it sounds too empty. And witht the drums, i would have really like it if you used an open high hat, instead of a closed hat.
Maybe add sum reverb on the snare and crash. No, add ALOT of reverb on the crash.
To make it alot smoother.

other than all of this bullshit that is coming out of my mouth, or out of my fingers if u wanna put it that way, its really good. Keep it up!

And another thing.

Focus on being smooth. Thats what makes trance trance! Electronics and smoothnis. And i think that u almost got it down.

theblackhawk--_--