This is pretty interesting.

It's okay that your title doesn't match. But it does detract from this strange Rock/DnB thing you've got going. The quality of your intruments are pretty crap, but that's okay cuz you pretty much work them well. I'd just have to say that the repetitive guitar groove gets a little annoying and the ocarina sounds are a little substandard. The bells were cool and your drums are kickin.
Except for in the beginning. Those snares in the beginning don't achieve much. And the bar or two of guitar before the main riff lasts a little too long for its purpose. It also gets annoying.
The climax of your song rocks though. If you just change your instruments this is a really cool version.