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Not too bad
I don't like how you panned the drums. They sound really weird when they're just in my right ear like that. I thought the whole song was gonna be like that until the little arp came in on the right. The rhythm of the arp is a little weird too. It sounds really random, but it also reminded me of the intro song on FF7.
The bass is actually really good and fit with the rest of the song. The lead instruments are okay, but nothing too special. The piano was also okay, and at least you have a few instruments. A lot of songs I hear try to do everything with just one sound. It's good that you have a few good sounds together here, and they all fit well. I thought the song picked up nicely around 0:33 when you dropped the arp. I also like the rhythm of the drums, but I still don't like the panning choice.
Work on mastering and mixing too. All of the instruments sound untouched mix wise. Not too shabby. I like this tune.
thanks for the advice
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