Pirate Poem


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08/26/2009 | 08:16PM EDT

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Voice Acting Loop | 821.7 KB | 35 sec

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Author Comments

There once was a pirate,
he sailed on his ship,
one fateful day he went on a trip.

With treasure in mind,
and wind in his sails,
he hoped he would find
an island free of males.

The wenches they teased him,
the sirens they pleased him,
he knew he had found,
the ultimate kingdome.

He was there just one week,
the outlook was bleak
he had been blead dry,
"You wenches ain't cheap!"

Yarrrrr.

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Average Score: 6.3 / 10

Score: 8
Omahdon

"Ahhh, the trials of a lusty pirate!"

date: August 26, 2009

I envy people who can make rhyming couplets and they don't sound awkwardish! Your reading could use a little work - but the poem itself is sound! Also, the repeating background SFX was a little distracting - best just to find some sea SFX that can go the full distance rather than something that's on a 5-second loop.

August 26, 2009

Author's Response:

This was a learning experience for me so constructive criticism is just what I need. Thanks for being honest.

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Score: 5
veteranpie

"Okay"

date: August 26, 2009

It's okay but i didn't like to much. The sea sound in the back is nice.

August 26, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for the fair vote man.

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Score: 6
DeatHTaX

"Meh...kind of a weak voice"

date: August 26, 2009

wasn't a whole lot of pirate-y-ness in your voice. And when there was, it quickly went away when you got caught up in reading the poem. I like the poem, but the tempo was very mechanical and dry. i felt like there could've been a bit more emotion and exaggeration in your voice and tone. Good job, though :D

August 26, 2009

Author's Response:

I would have added more things to do with my voice but I wanted to be sure I stayed within the time limit. Plus I was trying to make sure people could understand what I was saying. Still, not bad for my first attempt at voice acting.

Thanks for the review! :)

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