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Aug 24, 2009 | 6:50 AM EDT
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3.4 MB
2 min 58 sec
Score
4.37 / 5.00

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Rated 4.37 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Drum N Bass
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Author Comments

So this is going to be my entry for the Synthetica vol.2 EP.

It's a demo aswell as a WiP. I hope to get lots of constructive reviews so I can improve this before the deadline.

FULL VERSION WILL BE LOUDER, MIXED BETTER, HAVE MORE VARIATION AND BE LOUDER!

The deep growling basses are samples that I downloaded. They're from Rig's cardboard samplepack, which you can download for free here: http://www.mediafire.com/
?yyzofjzjgyg

Pass on the love to Rig, he's awesome. :3

Edit: I *might* get rid of the cardboard basses. I find them rather... strong, in the mix and I'm going for a more neurofunky approach. This has gotten 100 views in the course of the last 6 hours. Help me out and review if you think the cardboard basses fit or not? :(

Edit 26th of august: Editted the track. There's now a 3 minute demo, with made changes thus far. Lowered the quality a bit, so it's still in good demo shape!

Enjoy, rate, REVIEW!
~ La_Yinn, --'

Reviews


HaggardHaggard

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

First part sounds too repitive

I think the first part of this song is too repititive. It got better after the vocal sample during the middle, where you added some more sounds to it.

Of course the ending isn't really satisfying right now, but seeing as this is only a demo right now I guess you have something much better planned for the full version. ;)

Overall the song is a bit too repititive right now, but it does sound very promising.

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la-yinn responds:

Oi, didn't see this review 'til now, sorry for the late reply!

Oh hell yeah, something big's in the planning. More variation in the beginning and some sick melodic work after the vocal sample part (which will obviously be removed)

Thanks for the review! :-)


InsanimationInsanimation

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Bit unorganised..

I didn't feel it was anything special, to be honest..

In most of it, especially the first half, it just sounded like you had a beat,and then just kinda put some random sounds at places..It didn't feel too organised.

Also, that intro/link in the middle didn't fit..It would have been more fitting in the middle, or not at all..It just divides the song a bit too much..

I don't like how it just completely cuts off at the end. Try to find more creative ways to end your songs.

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la-yinn responds:

It's a demo, hence the vocal sample in the middle and the abrupt ending.

It's chaotic DNB, so it might sound unorganized but it definately has a structure.

Thank you for your review all the same, though.


SoapbubbleSoapbubble

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Interesting

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Score: 9 / 10
Summary: Interesting
Review: An all-around well-made track.

Though it is annoying with the voice interrupting the track, I can't pull you down for that. You might wanna move it to the beginning or something, though. That way, it wouldn't completely stop the song, before letting it carrying on.

It's an original track, I can't say I've heard a lot like this before. I loved the bass sound, combined with a catchy beat.

I could wish for some more melody. I know its DnB, but that doesn't mean there shouldn't be melody. Wouldn't mind some more variation, either.

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la-yinn responds:

Working on ittttt! :D

Thanks for the review!


FroFro

Rated 5 / 5 stars

~ Review Request Club ~

Good job all around. I was thinking about taking some off for the way the voice interrupts in the beginning, but I decided not to. It should really go in the beginning or at least it'll make the song better if you did that in my opinion.

Very original sound to this all around. Doesn't sound generic or anything, which can be hard to come by. Set it up perfect and I can't really see anyway how to improve this in anyway. (probably since I don't know the techy stuff about music)

Pretty good all around like I said. Original sound to it and a very catchy beat. Worth a listen to so check it out people. ;)

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la-yinn responds:

Haha, thanks a lot Fro! ^_^


StepStep

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Original ^^

This sounds quite unique, unlike other songs I've heard, and it's pretty well done, so good job :).

This needs more of a melody. There are loads of parts in the song which are drums only, so a melody would help. The sound effects are what make this song sound unique and cool, and the instruments, although a little strange, are quite good too. I agree with Coop when it comes to the demo vocals, you should've put them at the beginning.

The transitions were quite good, but some need work, like the one at 1:05. It kind of disrupted the flow of the song. Instead, I'd suggest a two bar drum roll an in the second half of the second bar, you do that effect you used. The intro was very nicely done, although the ending was too sudden, but I guess that's because it's a demo.

The drums have very cool sounding samples, but they need to be varied a little more. The drum beats you have right now are great, though. It just needs less repetitiveness.

Overall, a unique song which sounds pretty cool. Just work on variation, more melody, and some transitions. Good job on it.
8/10
4/5

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la-yinn responds:

Very sweet review. I've already fixed up some transitions in the way you suggested, haha. But I'll defo add some more variations to the drums and get some sort of melody.

Thanks for the review. :-)