Forgettable

I feel like this is the background to some better song and you posted this instead of the full version by mistake. It has some promise, but it's lacking half of what a song should have.

uhm agreed with blerb795

don't like the original song.. but that has NO precedence in my opinion of this song.. this is rather.. boring.. uninvolved.. and simplistic.. rather annoying overall.. IT IS PLAYING AS A WRITE THIS.. so I will stop so i can stop this song from playing..
im sorry :S

beatless

needs a beat!!
otherwise good arrangement
and mmkay choice of synths

Decent

You kept the original theme tune, while making it your own. I would suggest adding a secondary supporting tune to round it out, as it currently feels slightly echoey and hollow in places. This would also allow you to make it more unique to your style as well. Other then that, not bad at all.

Great Song

Let me just start off by saying: 'Fantastic work!'
I loved how you incorporated your own style while maintaining the key melody to the actual song. Everything you lacked in lyrics you made up for with skill. However, you could have done better with the items you used. You didnt spread out to different little bits and pieces you could have made. It sticks to the same boring sound and fading in and out. Other than that, I can't complain. Great job and keep up the good work.
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In Otherwords-
Alright blerb795, let me explain something to you. If you knew the least bit about audio creation, you would know it's incredibly difficult, even for someone who is quite skilled at it. It's also hard to use programs such as FL Studios to bend your audio around lyrics, let alone the ORIGINAL ones. Besides, you're just like so many of the annoying trolls on this website that leave comments everywhere thinking they're giving helpful criticism, where in fact you're leaving none. Your review didn't do shit. By the way, if you're going to give this song a 1, you're going to have to be able to do better. And this song is pretty god damn amazing if I do say so myself.