Score: 6

"Hm..."

by: Darklight17

date: November 1, 2009

I'm sorry but this only deserves a six...

Melody was way too repetitive and like Coop83 mentions with utter icredulence (:P) Seven Notes? U defintely need to vary the melody even though u had a good starting melody there.

It didn't loop that well either, there's too much of a skip from outro to intro (although these were virtually non existent...)

Overall, its not bad for a melody, but it definetely needs improvement.

Darklight17
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Score: 6

"Seven notes?"

by: Coop83

date: November 1, 2009

Come on man, I know that you're better than this as much as you do - this is a little lazy and it does take away from the tune, by having by my count six or seven notes, balanced by the sand dancer and the bongos.

I think that the track could be a lot longer and have much more variation, without really detracting from the calm, soothing ambience that you seem to be projecting. I'd say that it kind of sounds like a desert island beach, with how simply it's put together. Give it time and a little more effort and you'll have something much better.

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Score: 7

"Sweet, but maybe too short"

by: Kirbyfemur

date: October 31, 2009

Don't know if this is meant to be a work in progress or what, but it's nice but needs more.

Bring out the percussion section more, it'll help the song progress smoother, and liven it up a bit.

The obvious is extend it, build off of the melody that you've given. It's a nice melody, but gets too repetitive when you listen to it to long.

This could be a nice little latiny song here, just keep on working on it, would love to hear the final product, unless this is the final product that is lol. =3

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Score: 8

"Expected something different"

by: Haggard

date: October 30, 2009

"Say goodbye forever" doesn't sound too happy. But the tune is quite cheerful and doesn't sound like a "goodbye" at all, let alone a "goodbye forever".

Anyway, the melody is really nice but it's rather short. It just loops over and over again. I wished there was something more happening, like some build up to a complete song with this melody as the main theme throughout the song.

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Score: 8

"awe dude cmon"

by: SessileNomad

date: October 26, 2009

for a loop its good, but i totally wish it would go to more places, it sounds to good right now

it that really you on guitar, if so, your pretty good

not much to say, its short, its good,

good precussion

SessileNomad

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