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Uploaded
Aug 17, 2009 | 3:05 PM EDT
File Info
Song
3.2 MB
2 min 48 sec
Score
2.98 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 2.98 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
434 Plays | 31 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Trance
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Author Comments

Hi,

this is my first song on newgrounds and my first song made in FL studio. I made this as a test, but I tought it sound pretty well, so I've decided to share it with the world.

I'm wondering if you guys like it and you will probably have hints and tips for me.

Please feel free to add a coment, please note good points as bad points, so I can try to make even better songs in the future!

Thanks for listening and enjoy :-)

Reviews


NanvanNoordNanvanNoord

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Hmm

First of all you used the eurogate preset from sytrus wich is overused.
It could sound happier and there could be a bit more variation as well.
I also think you used the basic kick wich was given in fl studio.
Let me explain how the structure of a trancetrack can look like.
First of all you start with a kick, open and closed hihats and maybe a background melody wich play for 16 bars. You can also add some percussion or FXs so that he intro doesn't sound boring, then you introduce a clap as well wich again plays for 16 bars. After those 32 bars you introduce one or two basses and maybe a sub-bass and slowly build up to the climax.
A 2nd melody might be necessary and a pad would also be nice.
And then there should be a breakdown as well where the pad often comes in the foreground.
I hope that helped you a bit and try to work with some external VST plugins as well.
Won#t vote too hard since you said it is your first song.


Miklas responds:

Well, I missed, I've seen too late that I've already submitted something here on newgrounds, more then a year ago. But that's just rubbish.

Anyway, thanks for the comment, I'll see what I can do with it :-)