Score: 9
"Very nice"
date: August 23, 2009
I think that this started off a little slowly, but soon made up for it - the basic sound that you've got going to pace the track just sounds a little boring in the first minute or so - perhaps try just changing something a little in that, before it fizzes out and passes to the piano, becoming a firm backing piece.
I think that you've got a good sounding piece and this can only really be helped by a few things - making it a better loop for starters would certainly help, especially cutting down the intro for the second time around if that's possible at all.
Stopping the melody and the counter melody, allowing the bass solo was good, but you didn't capitalise on it - it deserved to do more, then it just fades out to the ending, which was a shame. Ram that home with some great bass samples and then bring back the melody and counter melody.
[Review Request Club]
August 23, 2009
Author's Response:
yeah i think that the ending really didn't do the song justice, and hte intro was extended a bit for if the song were longer and to be integrated into a dj set. i think it was varied enough that it isn't a bore, so i think i'll keep it ;) i also wasnt intending for this to loop--the audio portal has moved away from being the tools of flash users to its own autonomous music portal--so i intend it to be a song in itself and thats how i plan to keep it.
thanks for the review!
