Not bad
I think that the rhythm guitar is not given enough credit here and the lead guitar is just pissing about, to be brutally honest.
The rhythm and the drums carry the piece greatly, but the experimental quality of the lead guitar really does bring the track down, sadly. Perhaps sitting and listening to the piece before submitting will help. This would be the audio equivalent of proof reading and as a result, you'd be able to provide yourself with such an improvement, even before submission.
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