I recorded this on audacity and as the name implies its still unfinished.
I'm still relatively new to recording so any advice or feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Enjoy :)
use a wider range of guitars bro
i think that you need not only a heavier sound on the background guitar, but to add more to the part where the melodic harmonies come in, u know? i would also add drums and a bass. try to get a better quality jack as well ;)
btw, could yo u check some of my stuff out? it would be greatly appreciated. (not forming anesthetic please lol) thx :D
I'll make sure 2 do that when i edit/rerecord this part of the song :)
Well...
It was...ok. I think that your idea for a song is good, but it definitely needs some working on to get to a final cut.
-All your audio is coming out of one side of the speakers. Check your settings on your Midi box or in Audacity to make sure you are equalized. If nothing else, double the track, have one be faded left and one faded right.
-Try to get some drums in your song. I think Audacity has a drum machine, I'm not sure. If not, get FL studio.
-Your guitar is a little fuzzy. Try to get it a little cleaner by playing with filters in Audacity.
-If your entry is supposed to be a loop, it doesn't do a very good job of looping seamlessly. Try adding another picky part at the end if you truly want it to loop well.
-It's too short!! I think once everything is said and done, this could be a really good song if you make it longer!
Good luck! I hope that I helped a bit!!
Thank you for your advice. I noticiced that it was all coming out of one side but i think thats down to my input jack being damaged slightly. I think that it can be remedied in post production though. Sadly my version of audacity has no drum machine but ParlorMonkey has offered to record some drums for me.
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