Score: 7
"What does DnB stand for?"
date: November 6, 2009
So, good job on making it to the top of all time list. You must be really proud.
So, your melody is nice, its interesting, and it shows that you put a lot of creativity into this song. That is really good. However, there are some flaws that could use some fixing up.
First of all, your melody was really repetative throughout the entire song. While your song was really nice, the melody just kept repeating itself over and over. Try coming up with more than just one melody and then make sure that all the ideas that you are using and have come up with transition well between each other.
The song was kind of weak overall. You really have a simple tune here. Try coming up with some more parts for this, or just make the melody more prominent. I thought that the beat kind of overplayed the melody, which is not a good thing to do.
Other than that I think it was pretty good. Keep up the good work and I hope to hear more from ya m8! Peace,
PO
P.S you will be getting a download.
November 6, 2009
Author's Response:
thanks!! :D
