PaperFoldingInUponItself(DEMO)


Date Submitted

08/05/2009 | 01:30PM EDT

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Dance Song | 2 MB | 2 min 9 sec

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Current Score

4.18 / 5.00

Score Rank: #33,824
Popularity Rank: #70,622

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Author Comments

This is my latest project that I've had in the works for the past few days. It's quite incomplete, but I think it's up to a point that I should share. I basically got some drum samples and then pulled together a bunch of presets for my synplant VST, added a couple of effects, and this is the result thus far. I'm trying to put most of my focus on the composition, and the overal flow of the different sections of the song, and the harmonies and melodies.
It's only a demo, and I hope to finish this song pretty soon, mix it properly, etc. But I hope you guys like what I've done so far.

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Average Score: 9.5 / 10

Score: 10
solarflare67

"WOW"

date: October 16, 2009

i dont know why my review is so good or why im reviewing but this song demo is so awesome! but as the guy below me said a bit repetitive and also that low instrument is horrible if you change that so something medium pitched or higher than that crap sound i hear now then it would be perfect. that low sound doesn't fit it just makes it sound mucky. ill be waiting for the real thing! nice job

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Score: 9
The-Great-One

"You're Right... More Can Be Done"

date: August 29, 2009

Although chances are you'll be able to perfect it, I truly do like it the way it is. Everything just moves so smoothly together. It's actually beautiful to hear. However it is a bit repetitive, not a bad thing, but not exactly my style either.

I like what you got set up here, and with a splash of creativity you can create something wonderfully superb! Might I suggest the addition of strings somewhere, it may sound weird, but I think it could work for this song.

August 30, 2009

Author's Response:

All suggestions are welcome! Thanks for the review. I haven't done much with this song in a while, but, given the right ideas, I'd love to kick this through to finish.
Cheers.

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