Epicly drastic
I realy liked the deep croaky kind of evil voice. I also liked the jump at the beggining, definatly one of the best "jumps"
"By jump i mean a huge increase in sound and beat"
Good job :D
Numb:
Zipped tight
Sewn shut
The truth has been denied
Thrown down
Fucked
Still the plot your demise
Docile controlled
You let them blind your eyes
Futile they hold
Onto your puny mind
Chorus:
Numb
You just wanna be
Numb
Too tranquilized to see
Numb
We'll all be erased
Numb
Our end has been embraced
The strings are being pulled
With so many taking credit
Your all just being fooled
Your too stupid to admit it
Rights replaced with chemicals
Now protest is unlikely
Once thought of as a miracle
Our freedom is blind
Rights replaced with chemicals
Now protest is unlikely
Once thought of as a miracle
Our freedom is blind slavery
(chorus)
Wait for them yo say
Just why we ended up this way
Living everyday
So we can finally waste away
Your turn to be dosed
And I doubt you even know it
The meaning is so close
Too bad that you've already blown it
Epicly drastic
I realy liked the deep croaky kind of evil voice. I also liked the jump at the beggining, definatly one of the best "jumps"
"By jump i mean a huge increase in sound and beat"
Good job :D
sounds like psycoln nine
again, the only thing holding me from giving you a 10/10 would have to be the vocals. although they are MUCH better on this song, the spoken parts sound like you're talking through a fan. idk if theres a way to fix that but other than that i fucking love it keep it up!
thanx man, ive been workin on it, as soon as i get something i enjoy goin i'll upload it and let you know man...
Wow
I have to say i never really cared for music like this till i listened to this song....
Good work and keep it up
thanx alot, glad to help out haha
bangerrrr
love the lyrics. well developed man im diggin this shit!
Thanks man, I'm thinking of doing something more on the verse vocals, maybe a lower octave or something.
OOOOOO
"Numb
You just wanna be
Numb
Too tranquilized to see
Numb
We'll all be erased
Numb
Our end has been embraced"
= AWSOME!
the rest could use some work... still fav'd...
The verse vocals need something....
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.