Score: 7
"It lacked that "something""
date: August 3, 2009
It wasn't bad to listen to, but it just felt like you'd mashed quite a lot of things together and haven't found that something that makes a song listenable to the extent where it can be repeated and enjoyed.
I think you've sort of gone over the top with what you've included, it feels overloaded with content, but it's a good start, maybe some refinement will make it perfect?
Good luck with the contest!
August 4, 2009
Author's Response:
i see what you mean i got printer sounds making up the backgrounds, the hats are infused with a printer click and the melody and that printer "whine"-ish sound are one. but i did try to make it over dramatic