Good

I really like the sound of this. Its maybe a bit repetitive, but the melody sounds quite quite nice. A little quiet for techno music, try and crank up the drums a little (and everything else a bit, too).

Keep going, I like your style!

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Its good, especially for your first techno. I'm guessing you've submitted before, right?

Well, it was good, but a little hard to hear, i had to turn my speakers up pretty high to get the full effect of your song. haha.

Also, make the kick a little bit louder than everything else.

Other than that, nice job!

You have some reall good melodies there, and some good synths to make them.

Peace