Score: 9
"AAH SUCKS"
date: October 19, 2009
HEY LISTEN TO ME PLEASE.
The introduction to this song, it's so generic. I almost forwarded past it because I've heard about a hundred songs that start out the same way as this one does. You really need to work on the hook in your introduction, because you have some really cool stuff in here. It's got a nice sound to it, it's mastered well, the instruments were well chosen, and the melodies and pads are well organized.
But your introduction sucks. Please for the love of all that is holy make it more original! What's your style? Why is your style not in the beginning of this song eh? It's like writing an essay, try to embody your song in the introduction-- if people like it, they'll listen to you explain it.
Specifics:
0:00 generic
0:14, gets better, gets generic again
0:28 from here on is the goods.
9/10
5/5
I like it.