Score: 9
"i see where you're coming from."
date: August 15, 2009
yeah, that is a very nice piano sound [though i think it could use a) some clever reverb-ing maybe, and b) some boosting in lower frequencies to make it have a little more presence] [actually, check this out: http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/70 79/frequencyguide7slrd3.jpg]
then again pretty much the entire track can use a bass boost, so it might jst be the mix overall.
but this is really nice. i think you could make it a more intense chase once the breakbeats come in by making it a little more complex beat with other forms of percussion.
the chord that you center on has a beautiful dissonance and gives the feeling of a more emotional chase rather than a stereotypical vicious one, and for that, it plays out very strongly. good job.
btw the breakbeats that continue after all the instruments are gone... yeah, take that out plz and make a proper outro haha. though u werent really being serious as the description implies, so whatever haha
[wanna check out my latest? ive been gone from the portal for a while haha. i'd appreciate it :)]
September 7, 2009
Author's Response:
hey that guide has been helpfull alot!
I checked your latest song out and it's good man!
I've been a bit lazy with the drums XD
thanks for reaction!
