Hey there!

I thought I'd pay you back a review, it's only the nice thing to do :)

I personally think this is pretty good. Now that I've said that, if I may, I'm going to give some critique. First off, I really like the lead (melody) synth, it definitely fits the song. So the synths are pretty good :)

Percussion... the kick's good, but the clap leaves something to be desired :( It seems kinda quiet and shy compared to everything else in the song. I think something with more pop and less laid-back feel to it would work better. Just search through some clap samples for something with more energy :)

There was a glitchy thing aroun 1:50 that I liked, but it just seemed kind of abrupt and random to me. Maybe having a short kick roll in front of it would help it from being so out-of place?

Anyway, I really like this! I don't know how long you've been making music, but keep it up. This is good stuff!

-Lamp