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In The Park (A Revisit)

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Date
07/26/2009
File Info
Song
5.8 MB
6 min 22 sec
Score
3.99 / 5.00

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Genres:
Southern Flavor - Country
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Author Comments

THIS IS NOT MrRandomist, THIS IS HIS FRIEND USING HIS ACCOUNT TO UPLOAD AND SPREAD HIS MUSIC ETC, WHICH IS BASED AT at www.myspace.com/darcyhay

This song is in open G tuning, played with a dreadnought Tanglewood, G Marine Band Hohner and D5 AKG microphone through Audacity.

It's only a demo version (or sub-demo version; I'm planning on cutting a better sound quality demo in the near future), and you will over hear a few things like me kicking the microphone stand in the beginning and having a bit of poor placement of the microphone (which is being run through a Hughes And Kettner Edition Blue guitar amp, hardly desirable for a good performance!). This, coupled with it being completely raw (I haven't touched up or mucked with mastering and mixing it properly, because I don't know how) and unproduced.

Lyrically, it's about a girl I was interested in who told me that she wasn't ready for a relationship, and promptly started dating another person within two days.

Lyrics are below;

The young couple kiss,
In the warm, silent park,
Scent of the grass,
Alive and growing,
'Neath the young lover's feet,
Fills the air.

His tender embrace,
Her soft breath so fair,
A bird sings triumphant,
Somewhere in the shelter,
Of the trees, who stand watching,
And silently wishing.

Two eyes peer,
From the gnarled, hanging branches,
At the girl beneath that filthy brute,
Making his advances,
The eyes lay in thought thinking,
"She's a whore anyway."

The harlot and swine now,
Get up and shoulder off,
While two eyes burn between the,
Branches of the silent trees,
Trace them like lasers as they shuffle,
Towards the bright, bright city.
Two eyes link thought back to their brain,
A mutant splice of fury and pain,
Runs wild in the starry sky,
Winding care free to the window high,
Where the lovers lie in satisfaction,
Culmination of their attraction,
While the that trees harbour the bitter soul,
Scratch in mocking of its lack of control,
To achieve its longing heart's one bid,
To do as the young lovers did,
Fury and sorrow on the edge of the abyss,
Lonely and longing for one sweet kiss.

Now shamefully it loosens its pants,
Summation of desire in a screaming red dance,
Where wishing fails, hard labour must replace,
With a vertical salute to the slut's fine face,
Though tonight, it cannot complete the act,
Burning self loathing forces it to retract,
Cries long hard and loud, with its head in its hands,
At all the failed attempts and decapitated plans,
Two eyes bleed grief, while a weary mouth moans,
For all the unloved, unseen and unknown,
Icy dying glory; "I'm so alone"
So very alone.

I'm not too familiar with Newgrounds, but MrRandomist tells me to add that reviews are welcome.

Thankyou for reading this and listening to the song, and I very much hope you enjoyed it! As said, you can check out the Myspace at www.myspace.com/darcyhay if you so choose. Anyhow, thankyou again and please enjoy!

Reviews


raketaraketa

Rated 2 / 5 stars

nice lyrics but needs some vocal improvement



robomanusrobomanus

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Hmm...

A little bit too long intro. And your vocal is too quiet. You need to concentrate on improving vocal skills. Don't try to shout to the microphone and try to sing more clean (sory but I must improve my english :D ). That's what I can advise. Anyway, a peace, calm piece :D