Score: 8
"Hmm lemme tell u something"
date: August 25, 2009
The beat and the synth bass is really good. Well don't get me wrong, it's a really good song but here are some things i want to complaing about:
Bad things:
I'm not really feeling ur chords, they don't sound so right. If u want, i can teach u how to make awesome chords :3
The song was repetive compared to the lenth of the song, and the song could use improves here and there.
Good things:
The drums.
Decent things:
Mastering, and the choir. When the violin come in at 1:17, it could be so awesome, but again, the chords were wrong :P
It's really a shame, because u are a really good composer, so if just ur chords were right, this would be a smash hit.
Helth
5/5 8.3/10
Btw, u kept my attention all the song.
Just do these things i told u to! Also a last hint:
The intro is way to sudden, u could make some evil effects and stuff, then drums, then break down, build up and climax. Then u would have an awesome DnB song on 3 min.
Thanks for your time! Hope this review helped ;P
5'd too :)
Keep it up :]
August 27, 2009
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for taking your time to review my song and give away some pointers on how to improve my music. You are free to teach me how to use chords just PM me some links or some tuts and im all ears!