Score: 10
"Another solid recording."
date: July 25, 2009
"Sheathed"- A bit of a challenge to get your tongue around. I mostly don't notice the pronunciations of most of the words I use in my writing, unless I decide to read it out loud. As far as I noticed, that was your biggest stumble out of the two parts, and I must say, that's quite impressive for a full 10 minute recitation.
Again, the first perspective female feels a little awkward, especially with the line "I think I'm pregnant". As Jade mentioned earlier, you bring out some good emotion towards the end, a nice, solid finish.
July 25, 2009
Author's Response:
I don't know why it gave me so much trouble, but I was determined not to get overly obsessive about it and just get the recording finished.
