Bagfight
Pretty good. A couple of things. I didn't like the transition 0:09, it seemed to go into Intro number 2, then i got to 0:32 when I thought it break into some heavy stuff, it didn't, maybe make this beat heavier. It might work well with the lead. Needs some more thinking and another pass, but it is a good base for what could be a cool song. O and compress that synth at the end especially, compress everything lol. Good luck.