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My attempt at making a metalcore song. For now it's instrumental only, but there will be vocals (and gay chorus of course) when I write some cheesy lyrics. There's nothing original in this song, it's all been done a million times before, maybe that is why I enjoyed making it so much. Feel free to write a review if you hate it.

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Average Score: 9.4 / 10

Score: 8

"yeah........"

by: key-bal

date: October 20, 2009

the only problem i have with this is thats its metalcore. it was pretty much perfect other than that. i hope u put this much effort into writing in an original metal style

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Score: 9

"Awesomeness"

by: Joeppiej

date: October 20, 2009

This is raw metalcore. This song has some really awesome riffs! Seriously, get a vocalist, record an album and become famous.

October 20, 2009

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Ok.

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Score: 10

"THIS."

by: Zacharias777

date: October 13, 2009

This is the very essence of metalcore right here. This would sound excellent with a vocalist. It kind of sounds like a mix between As I Lay Dying, and As Blood Runs Black. Don't be so pessimistic about your music, though.

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Score: 9

"Very Good"

by: dspires

date: October 8, 2009

I love your melodic guitar get some vocals in there and it would be awesome some of it sounds like As I Lay Dying Check out some of my stuff and tell me what you think.

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Score: 8

"It's cool"

by: SentinelX

date: October 1, 2009

Like you yourself said, it's nothing original...

But you play fast, hard and you how metalcore should sound...
If you are to add vocals try someone whos can do like everything:
grunts for the breaks, screams for the fast melodic parts and piggysqueals
for extra effects!!! That would totally kick arse!!!