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I wrote this song after writing a short poem the day before, hope you enjoy.

A Subconscious Prison

I thought I had escaped
I thought I had finally broken free
Maybe this world isn't for me
Maybe it was never meant to be

To be trapped in a surrealistic state of mind
It is a prison to never be broken free of
To be trapped in this eternal damnation
It is a fate created by a devious tormentor

The thoughts only besieging
The emotions run empty
Can this even be considered life
Or am I already dead

This nightmare will never end
My subconscious is now my prison

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Average Score: 6.0 / 10

Score: 7

"The guy below me..."

by: Enigma1087

date: October 4, 2009

... is just mad that he didn't get his usual serving of dick for breakfast from his domestic partner.

To be fair though, I can't give anything higher than a 7 because it did become a bit untidy in the last 3/4 of the track, but also couldn't give it any less than a 7 because effort was put in and it's got some potential. Just my 2 cents...

October 6, 2009

Author's Response:

Thank you and as for composition and playing I've gotten far better since. Also I sure if I redid it I could do better on the mixing as well.

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Score: 2

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by: jaysummers759885

date: September 23, 2009

Ummmm, you need to cheer up a bit. You have all your life, and .... you will need all that time to learn your guitar better.

September 23, 2009

Author's Response:

Wow, just a pompous ass. I need not say anymore for sad arrogant bastards like you. PM me if you've really got something to say though, I'd really like to hear your empty words.

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Score: 9

"so much emotion"

by: moquaga

date: August 20, 2009

how much time did you put on this? what gear do you use? I'm digging this. if you want check out my stuff. i give you a five and a nine. reason for the nine is the length and the fact i didn't want it end.

August 20, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks dude, my gear for this was my Line 6 Spider 3 and Epi Les Paul. Also, I'd say I put around maybe 6 hours into this piece. Glad you liked.

Also, I agree. It probably should have been longer, so who knows, maybe a part 2?

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Score: 4

"Loved it until the lyrics started..."

by: Yoshikawa

date: August 13, 2009

I loved the first 20 seconds of it, but then it just died when the singer started singing... :( Sorry, guess I just don't like your voice, but then again, you're talking more then singing.

August 15, 2009