Score: 9

"Nice chunk of music!"

by: LJCoffee

date: June 6, 2005

this is really decent work! - very nice use of background sounds - steady pumping beat gives it a nice club feeling. timbres are all good if a little tinny but it fits together nicely.

it does need something though for the 16 bars or so just prior to when it really kicks in. not sure what - but it feels just a little hollow - then again, if you mix TOO much in then it might get a bit too muddled up.

Keep it up man - your doing great!

Score: 6

"Has poential...."

by: RyanChampion

date: June 5, 2005

Ok dude, dont take any of this personally, I mean all of this to help out in the future. Try to learn to EQ and compress all your sounds properly, also, try to expand your collection of vsts & purcs from the FL standard ones. The Kick seems a bit too loud, maybe if you lowered the distortion on it and eq'd up the low-mid range a bit and compressed it it's sound a bit better imo.

As far as overall? This song does have potential, if you weren't limited to FL you could probly make this quite a bit better, to explain the 6, the song is quite simple 'not always bad' , and lacks originality from your average EDM song. Also, the synths are all FL standards, and quite francly, I hate them, but you did do a good job using them.

Keep it up :) like i said, this song can go somewhere if you can upgrade all the sounds. If you can send a midi of it my way I'll take a shot at remixing it for ya, or helpin you out with any problems you have.

Peace

Ryan Champion (aka Rush)
dj_rev_it_up@hotmail.com

*** please review my tunage too dude ;)

Score: 10

"Good... but as you said. OLD"

by: DjHexor

date: June 4, 2005

Dude, uve done like 7 versions of this song. Dont u ever get TIRED of sex songs? XD
I am.....

PS: Oh noes, you know who I am!! :O