thicken up your low end. :)

you've got something in the works here that could be good. you just really need to thicken up your low end.

make the bass warmer, maybe liven it up a little instead of just the solid notes after a while. :)

add a 4/4 kick drum with more resonance and feel to it. the breakbeat kick you've got right now comes off sounding too dry for house. if you drop another deeper kick every beat and keep the other, it'll give it a nice groove. :)