This is Nonascertainableness v2, despite the name change it's the same song. I took some good advice about the mixing, to differentiate between the two guitar parts and to amp up the brass section. The trumpets could use a little work but I'd still like some feedback on this song. Please rate and review!
Much better.
Nice job separating the parts up a bit.
The guitar still sounds a little muddy, not sure if it's in tune.
As Aliath mentioned, it does get a little repetitive since the chord progression remains relatively the same throughout.
A definite improvement though!
Loved the melody.
Pretty good, though quite repetitive. Good bored of listening to it two minutes.
It's worth a 7/10, though.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
JohnnyCellulose 
