Simple :)
I like that it is simple and interesting. I like how it expresses a mood effortlessly. I think that its neat that it does not have many notes or instruments yet it is really cool. Good job.
Author Comments
The Silent Rapture (Mini-theme), "Tears Without Form"
Cherish every note in this short melody, because that's all the sorrow I will spare for you. "Tears Without Form" by The Silent Rapture (my audio project). It's a very pretty instrumental, took me about 3 hours this morning. Just let me know what you think. ^___-- Might use this as an intro or outro to a rock song in the future.
And yes. I know it's short. That was the point--it's beauty is in its simplicity.
ShatterTheSky22 responds:
Then why such a low score? : \
What would you have improved?
My view on length
Sometimes, you don't need a twenty minute song to get the point across. Hell, sometimes, even a minute can be too long for taste. This length is perfect for this song.
Also, I picture this in a PS1 Final Fantasy game.
ShatterTheSky22 responds:
Thank you very much for the kind words.
I still agree on the length--its sort of just an emotion rather than a song. Like the emotion itself.
I just wish I still had the file so I could put the kind of mixing and effects skills I know now on it. lol
[TSR Audio]
Well.
Instead of remaking it entirely you could just make it a little longer instead.
its cool
loved it
ShatterTheSky22 responds:
Thank you very much for the feedback. ^__^
This is definitely not the end of this song in the grand scheme of my head. When I ge exhausted of my newer ideas, I'm going to continue this piece into a different direction.
[TSR]
...
Very nice.
It was simple, but like you said, beauty is in simplicity, which goes for most forms of art (picasso's painting of the sunflower as example) The piano complimented the gutair thing perfectly.
I could totally see this used as a intro to a metal song.
Keep writing, mate. You rock at it. :P
ShatterTheSky22 responds:
Thank you!
Yeah, I think that's the direction I'm gonna take rather thank sticking it onto the end of something. I just have to transition it right into something heavier after that point. Thanks again for the review.
Credits & Info
You might also enjoy…
ShatterTheSky22 Licensing Terms
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
