Score: 9
"This is excellent for a first submission"
date: October 12, 2009
I particularly liked the intro, though the rest was enjoyable as well. I don't think I'll download this one, but I will definitely have to keep an eye on your work in the future.
Also, you really should change the title if possible. It doesn't really have to be clever or creative, but the current one is completely useless. The title should be distinctive at least, and telling potential listeners that this is a chiptune would help as well.