WOW
lets be constructive about this one, you are garbage
Author Comments
so yeah... found out about the diss at about 1130 here's an hours work for yall... enjoy it while it lasts
the beat is by Gram (teddygram) called "[Blazin]"
Bring on them flatlines
How bout cpr on needle's?
How bout u hop off mines
I dun need uz tellin me
Make ya accounts pussy
I left yall reviews
n now yall come at me?
I don't even need 2 move
Yall chokin on ma dick already
Suck on it impoverty
A battle wit ma dick 2 never forget
Oops excuse me r yall wet?
How bout that mental help
Keep in mind this metal help
U facin a man wit a metal hand
battle to forget go back 2 makin a band
I bustin yall jaws so come see me
I got ya paused put on some real beef
I'm tired of human flesh so needless to say
Yall got me on play so listen poverty
Get ya broke ass on ya other account
N maybe shit'll last longer than ya mouth
How bout ya'll leave now n I wont follow u home
wont b in ya mind alone make ya switch wit ma tone
Leave ya even more broke than wut u facin
N u tastin ya bones I spoon feed u ya own
baby steps homes that's the path yall choose
Who's broke? I'm broke
Who's broke? yall in poverty
Who's broke? I'm jus needle
Who's broke? yall in poverty
Broken-Needle responds:
nah more like the Glad bag
Win!
Nicely done bro. Great work on the fast flow. You dont need perfect rhymes when you hit em so fast he doesnt even know what happened. Nice call on the ad libs.
Broken-Needle responds:
best part is only the intro statement didnt rhyme... n ye we kno who won b4 it even started... pussy ass has 2 hide...
lol
stuff we was wonderin.. what is a metal help? uhm.. a lot of things in there didnt.. come close to rhyming. well we will hitchoo back when we have time to waste
Broken-Needle responds:
lmfao, go fuck urself buddy u kno all u do all day is jack off 2 pics of me u got glued on ya moms pussy... Metal help i.e a fucking needle, n the metal hand(give a helping hand) n that gun cock yall got at the end of ya track, dont pretend kids or I'll ahve 2 talk 2 ya moms bout it.... how bout u take that needle dick out ya mouth b4 u open it again
PS tell ya dumbass moms I aint changing no fuckin diapers anymore, u ain't even mine....
Not my type of music, but
i think the vocals could have been better synced with the music especially the ending lines. (Who's broke? I'm broke.. etc.) The background beat was definitely the best part of the song. Lyrical wise, you need to learn more words. hah, nah but a little bit more selection of words couldn't hurt. Overall this song, right now, is alright, but there is a ton of room for improvement. good job though.
Broken-Needle responds:
i agree sir, this is godly to their garbage... I'm jus waiting for them to get serious. I agree completely with you, and thanks 4 the review
Keep it pimpin'
BN out
OOoooo ouuuchhh burn
Thats what that bitch gets!!! MURDER!
<33<3<3 I love youuu
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 2,247
- Downloads
- 45
- Votes
- 6
- Score
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3.83 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Jul 5, 2009
- 12:37 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 2.6 MB
- 2 min 0 sec
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