"uhhhhh...."

Ok... I think its awesome you tried to remix it. I just think it was poorly done (no offence!!) I'm sorry... It's just the tune is too high and the low parts are ominous. it's just not a good match up. Kepp up the work and practice practice practice! you will find something that works! :)

~Zorakas

Eh...

Way too high pitched. It feels like a bad carnival tune.

A little bit of advice...

don't up the ton next time, it just kind of ruins it, but I must admit, you had a decent choice of nstruments

Uhm...

I like the effort to create a song this way, but you should really listen to the song again.

Wrong keys.

You had the wrong keys for the song. Good attempt though.