Score: 3

"I'm not a big fan"

by: PoundDotBlam

date: August 15, 2009

Sorry... I just don't think this is trance. The beginning starts out as trance, but once you get to 1:50 it turns into noise.

I think your beginning is great... I think if you improved on the beginning so the notes are not so choppy from one to another, you have an excellent sound.

I was typing as it was playing, and at 1:50... there is just too much snare drum, and the melody is very sing songy. There is also not much variation in your melodic theme until the close at 5:36... it sounds like there is not much else to it.

My opinion is that if you take your theme in the beginning, which is very good, and build on that to your melody, you will have a good track. But honestly I would reconsider almost the entire song from 1:50 until the end.

I hope I don't like sound an a-hole to you... I just listen to a lot of trance and want to help.

1/3

Score: 10

"Amazing"

by: RandallFlagg

date: July 17, 2009

Not much more to say, amazing 0.0

Pss...don't tell anyone but this got me dancing lol keep up the good work *both thumbs up*

Score: 10

"I Remember your first use of this"

by: hondamxr13

date: July 4, 2009

And this on is just as good if not better. I'm surprised how you only used the original composition for a few moments and then it went right into this new creation of yours. Very well done \m/

Score: 10

"Kool"

by: Cayler

date: July 4, 2009

Don't ask me why, but I suddenly felt like a kid in the early 90's because of the way this sounded. I enjoy feeling nostalgia too so thanks. :) Nice chord progression. I'm not experienced with trance or techno so I don't think I'm qualified to give any pointers here. Except that I think it sounds great already. :P