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I got this melo from Sonix1241 but I never found the original name... so I gave it one!
Hey guys!
This is a short song but I only did it for fun. Of course, it would be longer if I didn't get writters block right in the middle of working on it...
DJ-HLS did not help with this song. I did it all by myself! I need to start using my own talents and stop using his so much.
Enjoy the MUZIK!
-MP
MuzikProd responds:
LOLOL, its horrible! well i dont like it but mabey ill fix some things and post a new thing later
Eh, alright.
Many things could be fixed with this song. To start off with, the hi-hats are too choppy, and shouldn't be like that cause they destroy the atmosphere of the song.
Another thing, some of the stutters in the melody are wrong and at the wrong places and make it sound like you're trying too hard just to put stutters in there, you don't need stutters. Also, the melody I believe you told me that you make, is off key. The last couple notes (1:06-1:08) just sound all over the place.
And now the piano... the notes aren't really placed all that good, giving the piano an electronic sound to it. You need to vary them more, compared to having 3 right next to each other in quick succession.
The bass... don't do the bass like that. Just no, lol. You can use that type of melody for an extra background/rhythmic synth, but don't use it for the bass, cause it disrupts the kick.
Also, the kick is wayyy too weak. for these kinds of songs, you need a MUCH more powerful kick.
Overall, it was OK. Not too great, but not all that bad either. I liked the melody, but I feel you could have done a much better job with the song.
{DJ-HLS}
MuzikProd responds:
"Another thing, some of the stutters in the melody are wrong and at the wrong places and make it sound like you're trying too hard just to put stutters in there, you don't need stutters. Also, the melody I believe you told me that you make, is off key. The last couple notes (1:06-1:08) just sound all over the place."
I konw. I couldn't get them right and I only did stutters to make it seem faster. I hate the 1:06 -1:08 notes too, they suck. Too bad.
Anyways. It dosnt matter now.
(all my songs get 7s -_-)
Alright.
Pretty good. I actually saw Sonix's vid on youtube about how to make a trance song. But its ok anyways. Could use a bit more variation though.
7/10 3/5
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