Dawn of Existence [demo]

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07/03/2009 | 03:29PM EDT

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Ambient Loop | 3.6 MB | 1 min 35 sec

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**UPDATE**
[I've fiddled around with this a bit, and changed some panning and transitions. I also made it have a better progression, so it doesn't sound too mellow. Enjoy!]

Album Title: Moonlight Harmony
Song #: 1
BPM Rate: 122 1/4
Instruments: 6 [so far]

Description: This is my first actual song that I'm working on for my first album. It's basically an intro song... but probably won't sound like an intro once it's finished. As mentioned, it's only a demo. The progression of the song is supposed to represent the beginning of something... like say, a sun rise on a beach. But my vision of what's happening is that of new life appearing on a just-born planet with mountains forming, water filling in the craters of land, flowers blooming... with a breath of new-born creatures. And those creatures aren't neccessarily evil, just curious as to what is ahead of them. There's also a rainbow colored sky with a hint of fog-like forms. ANYWAYS...

This melody/melodies of the song may sound out of sync for some people, but it's meant to sound like that. I want it to be unique and a bit abstract. Overall, I want people to like it. :) So most definitely give your thoughts on this demo. And tell me of what visions you see when listening. :D

P.S. I will be putting up only one demo for each song in the album before the release of the full version. That way... I don't have a bazillion demos cluttering all over. It also loops for your listening pleasure. Anyways, listen away! :P

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Average Score: 9.0 / 10

Score: 10
Crakle

"long time no review :P"

by: Crakle
date: July 12, 2009

lits been a while since i checked ur songs lol but this one is now one of my favourits !!! good job man continue ur ambient track

July 12, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for stopping by to listen! :D Been a while since I've seen you around as well, although I see you have a few new tracks. I'll be posting probably around 5 demos for the upcoming album before I start working on them again. Basically to kinda get out of the frustration to finish one song at a time, ya know? XD I'll give you a PM when I come out with more demos. Thanks again! :)

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Score: 9
Psy-nigma

"Cant wait to hear the full Album!"

date: July 10, 2009

anyways if you need fl studio help just contact me I teach fl studio at an urban music center now in b-town vermont.

the ideas and complexities of your song is heard and sounding very clear. right now though standing alone it seems to have direction and ambition but your not showing the listener where your taking them. the song might fit with some growing chords in the background to make it feel like your approaching the warmth of the sunrise. I have read your other reviews and respect the fact that you dont want them to take attention away from your other progressions. but a song that radiates and feels bright empty and relaxing kind of makes the listener want some warmth. and the chords dont have to be to much just have it very subtle and gently come in at a low bottom even like 20 seconds before the end just to make the person content with the journey that the song has taken them on and memorable.

July 11, 2009

Author's Response:

Awesome review from you! I can definitely understand where you're coming from with my song. It doesn't quite have the build-up for what the listener needs to hear to make it seem like there is a sunrise on the way. I definitely will take that into consideration for this song. And I will be asking about FL Studio from you to get better understanding of it, so it makes it easier to make music for me. Also, with what you said about this song in your review reminds me of the one song that you made for that game... where it progressively builds-up perfectly. Which is exactly what you mean for this song [I'm assuming]. Anyways, thanks for the review and tips! :D

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Score: 9
TheMagnusEffect

"I like it too"

date: July 8, 2009

My favorite part is when it gets to 48 seconds, and that other instument comes in, the two melodies go well together. I think to have the song more fitting to the title and description, you should start with one instument, and keep adding, like the progression of mankind itself, if y'know what i mean haha. good job!

July 8, 2009

Author's Response:

Yes, I like that bell noise. And it does fit in with the song. Glad you got to listen to this too. And I do agree with you about making the title and description more fitting, but... there's a slight progression in the song itself. The reason I did it this way is because I don't want the song to be too slow of a start, although it's at 122 1/4 BPM rate. Good point though! :P Thanks again for listening! :)

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Score: 9
Jenni-Harry4eva3

"I likes eeeettt ;D"

date: July 4, 2009

Berry, berry nice. I definitely like the that little industrial hat thingy lol. Interesing panning. It widens that track pretty well. And that pitch-modded crash is pretty cool in the background. It does repeat a bit, but I likes it that way lol. I could care less anyway.

You should practice making pads in 3xOsc :D It's fun. I was able to make a few of em. It would actually work better in this song =] I hope to hear mores. Very nice jurb lol.

~[IZK]

July 6, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks mate! The industrial hat sound was by accident. But I liked it cause it sounds cool. :D Of course, the repetition... but it's a slight build-up. I might change it a LITTLE, depending on how the outcome of the whole song. Yes, I should try making pads in 3x Osc. :) I've done some already, too! I'm glad to know you like it though. I was worried since it's such a slow paced song. XD

P.S. I did give your recent songs a listen. Didn't get a chance to review them though. I especially like the Saw Theme Remix one. :D But I'll get to an in-depth review eventually. :P

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Score: 8
Bru2712

"Well..."

date: July 3, 2009

I think it's good... but there's just a problem I guess... it's a bit repeatitibe, I mean, if you wanna make it a loop... it doesnt mean if it variates a little before it repeats... I dont really know I never make good reviews, but I think you should change it a little the rythm... maybe a little variation in the middle... and you should also add some background instruments (Acording to the main one) so it's not alone with the drums, for example you have "Tune of the forest", it's old I know and not so great, but... you see there are 5 differents synths, there is a main one, but the rest is going on with it, just imagine it alone... it sounds better with the "Background" of instruments, right? =) Just add some synth not so loud as the first one... but dont let it be alone... maybe some strings =)=).
I hope I made a useful review >.< =) keep going on.

July 4, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for listening dude! I have to agree with you in some aspects of the song and disagree somewhat too. I agree that using a background noise that flows with the song does make a big difference when listening to a song because it makes it sound different throughout the song. But I have to disagree that it's overly repetitive. Reason being is because I'm gradually building up the song to it's full potential, then dropping it with another melody. I do notice that in your songs that you change the melody quickly throughout the songs, but sounds good that way. But some of the songs you have are relatively short... but sound excellent. For me, I'm hoping to make it a decent, long track. Definitely thanks for the tip though. I'll keep that in mind. :) And I'll see what I can do to incorporate that into this song somehow. :D

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