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Jul 2, 2009 | 7:44 PM EDT
File Info
3.4 MB
2 min 56 sec
3.12 / 5.00

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Rated 3.12 / 5 stars
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461 Plays | 40 Downloads
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Electronic - Ambient

Author Comments

Hm well it took me quite awhile and still not very happy with it but I guess I'm done. Well the song is referring to that day of which is one of your best but then unfortunately it has to end. Then you know you're all sad well you don't have to be just wait because a day like that will soon come again or who knows maybe an even better one.



Rated 4 / 5 stars


It's nice, but there are a few problems with this song.

First off, I really like the melody. It's actually pretty cool. Unfortunately, that synth in the beginning completely drowns it out so that it is difficult to hear the melody. I would suggest automating the volume on that synth in order to bring out the melody more because the melody is far too good to be used for the background.

Next, I noticed that you like to use the shaker and ride/hat (if that is what it is) in conjunction with each other. While I appreciate the variety, I would change up that rhythm a bit. The ride/hat seems to interrupt the shaker. That makes the whole song appear to stutter. At least, in my opinion (I am probably not making much sense). =P

You want to make your song a little more dynamic. It sounds virtually the same throughout. Use some automation.

Again, that synth is my only particularly big problem. I feel like it dominates the whole piece.

I can see some improvement, though. Just don't be afraid to experiment and try other things.