Percussion made it sound like a techno-salsa thing... Lol... Well, I certainly cannot imagine this in a mysterious cave theme... But I liked the beat you put on it.
Author Comments
At the request of a friend, i changed a few things in my mt moon song and upped the tempo
EDIT: adjusted the levels
Correction: It was a Zubat cry.
Yeah, what ellebirdy23 said. Plus you have to put a little more thought into the ending. You have to build up to it, not end it so abruptly. Overall, it did bring back memories, which is good for me.
Ok, but there were some problems.
My suggestion would to be to adjust the levels. Your bass line and beat were kind of overpowering. There's a fine line of perfection in getting those "good for the ears."
Liked the "Geodude" call at the end. Very clever.
I just would've liked more from this...something new and fresh.
Points for doing a song that's not done often on here, though ^_^
Keep it up!
4321pickle responds:
Well, this is my first song so i'm really glad you liked even any part of it lol
and i'll take your advice for anything i make next time =D
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