I really liked it! :)

Damn good work man, sounds very put together and pro! I enjoyed the feel, and as said it felt pro, but for me that last number of the 10 points is just, the "perfect", and out of this genre, i cant give that. Because ME personally dont like this THAT much. And if i am to be COMPLETELY honest, the vocals may have been slighty off, now, im just being honest!

But as said, i enjoyed it. Your reverse sounds and your immense detail never fails. For me the vocals just didnt quite work, and for me this genre just isnt that "good", im sorry but i do have to be honest!

Its a preview, so ill come with some "tips". work some more on the vocals ;) It sounds like you are holding in, just give it what you got, im sure itl sound 1020410204102 times better! -b Nice guitar playing, your sound is really good there, especially with this particular genre! Nice percussions, your "ace" game is percussions if you ask me.

9/10
5/5

Keep on working man! L0_oking forward to the full!

Thank you for your time.

-[ BeatSource ]-

Pretty Coolz

Nice but could use a little touching up.
I thought the end was pretty creepy. Nice blending of instruments.
The guitar worked well - but - I think you could change a bit of the water at the start, if you wanted to. Just to make it fit in.

I liked it a lot

The voice was a bit hard to hear, but IMO it sounded pretty good. I think with a bit of work (either cheat with melodyne, or take a few vocal classes :P) you could have a pretty great voice for this kind of music.

I liked the guitar too, simple, but works great in the song.

The intro was neat, but I wished that it was incorporated more into the actual song. (The water sfx I mean)

Little kid's laugh was creepy :P

Good stuff, keep it up!