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A short industrial song i made for fun.

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Thanks for listening

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Average Score: 8.7 / 10

Score: 7

"Too repetitive"

by: Coop83

date: November 30, 2009

Don't get me wrong here, this is as good a start that you can make to a track as any, but the main issue that arises here is that it just sounds like the backing beat to a bigger project. Perhaps work on making it a little more integrated with something more in the melody stakes, so that it can carry it to the next level.

Good potential, but it needs to go somewhere else first.

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Score: 7

"Good beat, but very repititve"

by: Haggard

date: November 25, 2009

The ryhthm of this song is very nice, but there isn't too much else happening in this song. A main melody or some more parts that break up the structure of the song would be nice. It also would make the song less repititve.

Also, the song doesn't loop that well. It's quite noticeable when the loop starts over.

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November 26, 2009

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, i admit, it is a little repetitive. But it is a minutue long loop. And It loops well if you download and listen to the file.

Your feedback is appreciated, and ill keep in mind what you've said. :)

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Score: 10

"I liked it..."

by: RogerBK

date: November 21, 2009

The sound, the beat everything seems to work together...

U could make it more longer, because it´s too sad when it ends, i think u could add more 2 minutes, be creative, just use your mind to do what u want...
U could put some back guitars, usuing the main beat, it would be awesome...

Anyways, i loved the metalic beat, u could make more of this kind, i liked it so much
5/5 10/10 add on favs.

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Roger

November 24, 2009