Score: 6
"you could spruce it up alot"
date: July 1, 2005
I like the general vibe to this track. There was alot of reverb on that beginning sound, it seemed too much to me. It didn't mix well with the beginning sounds but started to feel nice when the cymbals of the drums kicked in. The mid-guitar sounds that came in at the end of the bar sounded great, I liked that sound alot. I think that this song would have sounded alot better without that starting sound however and in exchange add a bass melody that plays throughout the entire song.
There was, I think, just 2 bars didn't have that beginning reverb sound, an I thought it sounded great without it. A way that you could have kept that floaty feeling that the reverb sound generates would be to add some nice 1 time chimes or maybe adding another set of cymbals.
Things to add taht would make this a great track:
a good pair of snares that compliment the piano playing along with some slow bass notes. All of the notes being played were really high pitched and makes it rather sloppy; no median. This makes the clarity a little bad, also, due to the same pitch having to compete in my speakers.
Overall, this is a pretty enjoyable song.
-Jon