Lyrical adaptation (feat Monk)


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06/27/2009 | 03:51PM EDT

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Hip Hop - Modern Song | 4.6 MB | 2 min 31 sec

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4.15 / 5.00

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Author Comments

This track's by Monk Da Villian a.k.a MC-Q featuring me

lyrics:
MONK:
im not overrated just overly dedicated openly never patient when doing a demostration everybodys hating and wishin i never made it lyrical concentration im lyrically concentrated trying to adapt to being outta my zone tryna teach these young mind eating outta my dome tryna teach em that the main stream way was wrong and yelling at the cia to get outta my phone calling christopher boykin get rid of yah boyfriend he may look perfect but his intentions are poision jersey dont believe me then picture this persion 6'6 behind bars and an inch of a curtain think think cuz if one of them tanks hit ima get naked and started watchin yah sank ship picture yah ship sank stuck in a think tank runnin my track backwards though the core of my membrain you stuck on nsync and im workin on nsane bleeding on the canvas and your workin my templates how you goin b a stunner and you already been phazed? you claim you changin charts but you already been placed last luggage at the port but i already been claimed you an untaimed bullent who aint even been aimed you jus mr 101 go back to class yah carrer aint even start and you expectin to pass

BN:
yo lemme get on this
how is it that I give it
Ight ima b honest
I never made it
i stole the dam game
price tags on the shelf
I gotta play ma name
To remember myself
See ma thoughts are lost
to be on the moment
I push ma mind for its cost
been sold out n u kno it
so I take wuts not mine
thoughts, life, stop signs
trouble basicaly anything i cud find
So keep that in mind
For the next time
u go outside my lines

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Average Score: 9.8 / 10

Score: 10
LyRikLyNkLyNd

"Yeeeeeeaaaa"

date: July 13, 2009

Say monk, Stay up folk, NkLyNd fa sho wit them snaps. I gotta get my quality perfected on my levels but i got the studio in my house and im learnin wit it. maybe we could collab on sumthin, u got ill spit. Much love 2 BN for Bein in, keep ya mind 2 it kool kat, ruttin wit monk prolly have u lookin like apollo in no time.

July 13, 2009

Author's Response:

word up

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Score: 10
KillBillvolume2

"monk and bn"

date: July 3, 2009

WHY AINT I HEARD OF THIS YET lol
great shit, monk came hard
bn still getting there, also i think you left off on an odd bar. Not a big deal though. I could bump this in the chevy fasho

July 3, 2009

Author's Response:

word, no worries more to come=D

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Score: 10
LipzAKAmcrako0n

"veryy smoothh duo"

date: July 1, 2009

Bn & monk the severe emcee, I love the flow on this. the only thing I can pick at is the wayy you spat your verse needles, its raw as fuck but smooth it out a bit my g. I also thought you was gonna have a longer verse but its fine. I fav'd it. -real overr fakeee

July 1, 2009

Author's Response:

word i need the hot iron 1st, lol dno where i put it

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Score: 9
Emdee-NF

"nice track"

date: June 28, 2009

you guys were badass, i agree with Mao though, from so keep that in mind till the end it kinda ruined the vibe a bit, but the rest of your verse was sick dude.

5/5

June 28, 2009

Author's Response:

cool thanks=D

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Score: 9
MickeyMao

"Dopin Broken N"

date: June 28, 2009

Great track right here. Monk is on fire and BN is dope. The overdubs were perfectly placed and what not. The only sore part for the last line "outside my lines": Your rapping had a aggressive tone, but then the last lines where you talk it, it doesnt really flow well... Other then that this track is wicked, keep at it!

June 28, 2009

Author's Response:

true, didnt rly think of that, i recorded them w.o the beat there

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