Score: 7
"Well,"
date: June 24, 2009
there are a lot of great ideas here, but it seems you need to develop the ideas you have, then move more smoothly between them. It also seems as though you could have led up to the end a little better.
However, all of that said, it was an excellent first try at piano writing, especially for not having dynamics or other completed parts yet.
June 24, 2009
Author's Response:
Thanks...
That's what my sister said too..it didn't flow well (Music Major)
Haha..i guess i need to work on it more later...