Hmm... YES!
Wow cyber77 is harsh, i think that his review was pretty harsh, i found this song to be fine, it fitted the aspect you were looking for.
I'm not trying to say that I'm listening to this because it makes me feel happy, or to great, but i do find that if you were to need some evil existence track then yes this would be perfect!
How is this meant to sound Cyber77?
haha
I got the main idea, the lyrics brilliant, this made me feel like rebelling shouting, anger hate, something that i like about Metal, especially like this.
2:24 reminded me of Slipknot, but no different to many bands, i can see this being a top record for people who enjoy this Death Metalcore.
Guitar in-fact was excellent few nice licks and rhythms also drums were exciting varied added a nice affect.
And then you get to the part that sums this up as excellent as Vocal Aspect brilliant!
Keep it up!
Hemse 
