Not Bad, Not Bad...
I don't know what your effin' problem is, but that song was fine. In fact, it could be used for some of those more cartoony submissions. Once you learn how to use your creativity and imagination, little things like that go just fine. Of course, most people are all f*cking acid rock-loving b*stards who think that all the good things in life are too "kiddy" for their "coolness." What a bunch of *ssholes!