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Jun 22, 2009 | 8:08 PM EDT
File Info
4.6 MB
2 min 30 sec
4.37 / 5.00

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Rated 4.37 / 5 stars
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632 Plays | 43 Downloads
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Electronic - Dance

Author Comments

This is my second track ever, so please don't be harsh. I'd love criticism though, as long as it's constructive. I am trying to learn structure, melodies and mixing all at once.. This is my second try, hope you like!

Notes about the song:

I am currently working on a new intro/outro.




Rated 4 / 5 stars

Hello, new artist.

Let me point out my opinions.

Good choice of instruments and melodies
Nice drum sounds (most)
Interesting variety

Dull bass
No pad
No breakdown

I kept my review vague, because I believe that all artists find their own style. So, I say don't take too much criticism or inspiration. -KN

Inturtle responds:

Thanks a lot. Your review made me glad for these 2 reasons:

1: You liked my melody. I didn't think people would really enjoy this style of music.

2: you pointed out that I am missing a breakdown, I realized that while mixing down the song :(

I appreciate your review!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I like it!

Very good overall and nice beat but it could do with a little more bass! The melody has grown on me! It feels a little empty to be honest but I'm sure you could fill it!
Noice second trakc!



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Nice job man

When you showed this to me last night I thought it was choppy. It sounds pretty good. I'll give a 10 for effort + the extremly fast learning. Melody is nice and jumpy, but it needs variety... And the bass should change more often. Also, the ending isn't very good. You should, rather than add that pre-made arp, make one that better matches the melody and your instruments. The ending arp ruined the track a bit, it made it sound a tad generic.

I could move to this though, and dance is dance.

Inturtle responds:

Thanks man, I'm working on improving as fast as I can haha. It's hard :\ hopefully when I get my keyboard next week I'll get to making some better quality stuff. Thanks for checking!