The Thought

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Date Submitted

06/22/2009 | 07:10AM EDT

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Hip Hop - Modern Song | 5.2 MB | 2 min 50 sec

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4.31 / 5.00

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Author Comments

so LOL heres a song i made like 3 years ago, when i first started making beats and stuff. omg its so cool to have heard this after so long. ok at the time i didnt know how to use a beat machine or any other prgrams. so i made all my beats from fragments and put them all on a timeline. anyways...i know its not really on tempo. you'll never guess what i sampled this beat from!!!! it was chobits!!! i was a big chobits fan.. it think i shall watch the whole serious over.

dont take this song to serious when and if you comment. i was like 16! go easy lol i love it

lyrics
i wonder
if i was born a little bit sooner
a different place and a different place but the same luner
maybe a ruler, would my life be much fuller
or full of the same questions cause aint nothing newer
i ponder
upon the thought and question my morality
cause now it seems, my dreams or more of a reality than life
i rather live inside of a fantasy
then face the day to day hell thats constantly consuming me
if life, was what i see behind these eyes when i sleep
then it would be no dream, would i think the same things
it seems, lately that these thoughts are consuming me
i try to get my mind back, it keeps on eluding me

second verse

i wonder
if i was born a little bit later
i different mind behind the eyes of someone greater
maybe a leader would my life be much sweater
or constantly counting down the time till the reaper
appears on my steps, and says its time to meet my maker
i shake at the thought that even great men have the fate of
facing death, i trust that even they have a taste of
the same problems that a homeless man has to face cause
if you were in his shoes you'd do the same things that he does
everynight he aint in the same place that heat was
people look down, no one knows that he can be loved
or hugged the same way you do to someone you love
they treat him different, not the same as someone you trust
but know, what happened to him could happent to us
then we'd feel how it feels to be down and never get up
if i was him i'd know how it feels to have my dreams crushed

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Average Score: 9.0 / 10

Score: 10
Nic007

"omg"

by: Nic007
date: August 10, 2009

this is one of the best beats i heard Ever man keep this sh.t up ... i gotta look up this anime na

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Score: 9
atmos929NG

"very interesting"

date: August 9, 2009

that's one of my favorite anime themes... pretty well used there...

August 9, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks i take that extremely well sense its so old!!! chobits is awesome.

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Score: 10
TruDiaz

"Nice Track."

date: August 4, 2009

Its takin serously cause it gives meaning to the beat. Dam you killed this track. You got that Story , n Emotion. Extracting the Life in Lyrical Words.

I Wonder, one for the books. No Doubt.

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Score: 8
Knocturne

"Random"

date: June 22, 2009

I heard asian voices, but you sound black.

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Score: 8
DjRin

"=] happy face"

by: DjRin
date: June 22, 2009

i dig it even tho its a lil rough ;) understandable

the vox for the chorus really compliment this piece
solid MCing too, nothin wrong there.

ah well i dig it

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