woopdedoo first comment

i like the backround synths and the guitar sounds nice n clear. drums are nice n snappy, snares are crunchy.
but the only problem i have is that you tried to make a variation in the beginning but u gave up on it halfway through and just expanded on it to make it seem like u spent hours doing this. try adding less of a tune to start off with, build up, bring main tune in with the chorus, slow down, long build up, come back with a huge drop in, new sounds slightly changed tune