Score: 7

"__REVIEW FROM CONTEST__"

by: FatKidWitAJetPak

date: August 12, 2009

FINAL SCORE - 74 *averaged from all judges*

The quality of your home made sound effects was very nice and made the whole thing enjoyable to listen to. I didnt feel that you were to into you characters, however, as it was a bit monotone. The impersonations of the british guy, the joker, and Snake didnt really do it for me. They sounded like... a guy trying to impersonate them. I did enjoy the story though and found it funny that this guy just randomly broke into his house and had a bipolar breakdown of some sorts. You would think that the main character would freak out a bit more instead of saying "oh my god your bleeding." It should be OH MY GOD YOUR BLEEDING! Just work on your acting a bit. Try to actually BE THERE instead of talking into a microphone. I laughed at the concept, but it just needed to be carried out a bit better. Hehe, im in the fortress. -78

Thanks for entering the competition! Read below to see what the other judges said.

NAXSTER SAYS:

The Call - NG VA Competition

Acting 35 / 35
Fit 23 / 25
Originality 8 / 15
Range 15 / 15
Mixing 10 / 10

91/100

COMMENTS: None.

Stalagmite Says:

The Call - NG VA Competition By: Lithifold
Acting - 20/35
Fit - 17/25
Originality - 7/15
Range8 /15
Mix 8/10

- 60

SCRIBBLER SAYS:

Acting - 25
Fit - 17
Originality - 11
Range - 10
Mixing - 9

72

You took the easy route here with the whole Metal Gear concept (in the beginning) but I overlooked that. Otacon's yelling was very unconvincing, it was as if you were afraid of waking the neighbors (and I am talking about the real world here; as in you sitting in the chair speaking into a microphone.) I appreciate that you made your own sound effects and that was fantastic and the little twist you threw into this one with Steve being a deranged individual worked well with the contest guidelines. However, I do like how you made Steve do a bunch of different voices (Snake, Joker, etc) but I think it would have been better if you came up with your own characters instead of using popular ones, seems a bit lazy on your part. So it was a win/lose possibility and I think you won, barely since it stands apart from the other submissions in that regard though I think you could have gone just a little bit further with it.

Score: 10

"*admires your phone replication*"

by: rednikaiaG

date: July 18, 2009

ESPECIALLY your old school Nokia ringtone, Lithifold----->
Man, what a patient guy Jimmy must be to have dealt with all his friend's personalities. I almost wish I had that guy AS a friend. I mean, minus all the 3:00 a.m. calling, window breaking, blatant disregard to take his meds and such. Heh heh heh
I thought this was a FABulous entry. Your sound effects were nice, Joker voice was wonderful and the story was short, yet fluid, and cute. I'm glad at what happened at the end. Friends like THAT are hard to find.
Anyhoo, best luck to you on the contest, Lithifold!

............Take care, be good and take your meds.period

Score: 8

"lol"

by: HydroZero

date: July 1, 2009

funny script. good idea going with the phone call from steve the multiple personality wako :)

Score: 8

"nice idea but not too original."

by: Stalagmite

date: June 20, 2009

i heard something similar to this recently from another VA entry. so it doesnt feel to new or interesting to me personally. none the less the selection of voices demonstrated within your performance are quite good :D The joker was very good... infact all where good. but your expression was no where near your capabilities. i bet your in a house worried your family will hear you. MAN! just SCREAM! a realistic performance requires realistic Voice use. if you are angry you shout loud and aggresively....
i mean this is wonderful tbh. better than alot of the VA stuff i have heard.
well done! and good luck man! =D=D=D keep up the good work :D:D:D