Advice
Your not too half bad as a first timer and I can say good work 10/10 cause you totally deserve it!Here use these pointers for future music!
"Alright" when your making music your suppose to fine different kinds of artists that inspire you and then carefully listen to there music for inspiration(don't copy) plus you really shouldn't focus on one type of rhythm!When you have inspiration your able to think of more to finish your loop.Or you create your own group of buddies and you all could help each other out.